Headline fails attribute responsibility to Isreal
The Toronto Star has a responsibility to provide rigorous, contextual, and impartial journalism. This article falls short of that standard. I therefore urge you to amend the title of the piece to reflect a more balanced and evidence-based account of the killing of the Palestinian teenager, specifically attributing Israel in the headline
Read moreAttribute Khamenei’s decapitation to U.S.-Israeli strikes
Basic principles of responsible journalism require clear reporting of the who, what, where, when, and why. In this case, the sentence refers to “the strike” without identifying the actors responsible for decapitating Iran’s Supreme Leader.
Read moreYour article on prayers at al-Aqsa
First, the headline and body refer to a “ceasefire.” Its description as “shaky” is wholly inadequate; a better qualifier would be “ephemeral” or “chimerical.” This is because, at last count, Israel’s military had killed over 600 Palestinians in Gaza since the so-called ceasefire took effect in October 2025.
Read moreContext needed on Iran coverage
"The article reports that 'at least 7,015 people have been killed' in Iran’s protest crackdown, citing the U.S.-based Human Rights Activists News Agency (HRANA), while acknowledging that the AP has been unable to independently verify the toll. While HRANA’s work may be valuable, the figure is presented in a manner that risks conveying a level of certainty that does not exist."
Read moreSegment on West Bank could use more context
"While I appreciate that the segment includes references to international criticism on Israel’s annexation policies, the overall framing and language of the report are heavily reliant on Israel's administrative decisions. The real story is that Israel is ramping up its attempts at ethnically cleansing the West Bank of Palestinians."
Read moreArticle shields Israel from accountability
Media outlets have a responsibility to distinguish fact from assertions, and provide adequate, balanced context to the reader.
Read moreConcerns over claim of 40,000 arrested in Iran
"It appears that AP is relying on numbers from the Human Rights Activists News Agency (HRANA), a U.S.-based organization that aggregates arrest data through activist networks under conditions of severe information blackouts inside Iran. While HRANA’s work may be valuable, its figures have not been verified by a reliable third-party."
Read moreThanks + feedback regarding Israel's closure of Rafah crossing
As your article highlights, Meera (like many other Palestinians) was accepted into a Canadian university, only to have her semester deferred three times because of Israel’s closure of the Rafah crossing that made it impossible for her to complete biometrics and, in turn, meet Canadian immigration requirements.
Read moreRequest for correction of estimated deaths of Palestinian professionals
We feel that it is really important to be clear and not downplay the horrors that are unfolding or the level of criminality in what Isreal is doing. For this reason, I would urge you to change the word “hundreds” to “thousands”.
Read moreConcerns regarding article about Trump’s proposal
To be clear, I am not asking you to take sides in your reporting on Palestine and Israel but rather to provide reporting that includes new and significant developments in both Canadian and United Nations positions. I appreciate your consideration and look forward to your responses to my questions and request.
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