Israel is responsible for inflicting the conditions that have caused the poliovirus to surge
"At first glance these sentences seem to reflect accurate journalistic reporting, but the CBC never transparently mentions that Israel is responsible for inflicting the conditions that have caused the poliovirus to surge: the inability for Gazan authorities to collect garbage; Palestinians being forcibly expelled from their homes as Israel carpet bombs the strip and forces those displaced to gather in overcrowded refugee camps; Israel's conscious political decision to blockade the strip, meaning Gazans don’t have access to hygiene, sanitary, or medical products."
Read moreGlobe and Mail article buries pro-Palestine perspectives till the very end
"While I am glad the Globe and Mail are covering the ICJ decision, your article and its headline not only downplay the ICJ findings but outright misrepresent them. While this is a wire article, the Globe and Mail should, as is common, modify the headline to make clear that ICJ did not merely find that 'Israeli settlements' in Palestinian territories violate international law, but rather that 'the State of Israel’s continued presence in the Occupied Palestinian Territory [which includes the West Bank, Gaza, and East Jerusalem, not merely settlements] is unlawful.' To frame the ICJ opinion as being specifically about settlement policy, rather than about occupation in a much larger sense, is to fundamentally mischaracterize the nature of this ruling for your readers."
Read moreOmitting to mention the Nuseirat massacre is another example of Palestinian dehumanization
"First, while you merely give voice to Republican critics of the initiative, it would have been more appropriate to give other critics more space to make your article more balanced."
Read moreThe Lancet study regarding the Palestinian death toll in Gaza isn't "controversial"
"The Lancet is a reputable medical journal that sets incredibly high standards for publishing. It has been cited by the Montreal Gazette twice in the past year, which speaks to the outlet’s perception of this medical journal as credible, reliable, and reportable. To refer to the findings as “controversial” seems out of place and inappropriate. Please remove the word “controversial” from your article. Further, your description of The Lancet’s findings is largely incomplete."
Read moreConcerns regarding one-sided coverage of Hosam Mansour's death, aid worker in Gaza by the CBC
"First, you briefly mention one paragraph from the Al-Khair Foundation Statement that Mansour was an aid worker, then quickly pivot to the Israeli Army's unsubstantiated claims that “Mansour played a role in spreading violent activities throughout the Gaza Strip, and that Al-Khair Foundation 'transfers funds to terror organizations.” However, it is imperative to recognize that Israeli authorities have a notorious history of masking their war crimes and crimes against humanity through deceit, fabrications, and disinformation. Including Al-Khair Foundation’s heartfelt statement, which provides crucial context about Mansour's invaluable humanitarian work, would have offered a much-needed counterbalance to the Israeli Army’s narrative."
Read moreIs it a case of Antisemitism, Or Do Messages Condemning Israel's War Crimes Just Make Zionists Uncomfortable?
"While I am not here to defend Brock University Sociology professor Tamari Kitossa and his writings, it is misleading to accuse him of antisemitism when the accusations stem from the “critics” whom you don’t correctly identify."
Read moreCBC Article about discrimination doesn't mention anti-Palestinian Racism
"I take issue with your use of passive language and vague terms such as “war” instead of explicitly stating that Palestinians have been forcibly expelled in an asymmetrical conflict. Your claim that the ‘war’ has "largely cut off the flow of food, medicine and basic goods to Gaza, and people there are now totally dependent on aid" is wrong. It's not the ‘war’, but Israel’s deliberate systematic assault on Gaza’s infrastructure. Palestinians in Gaza are ‘cut off’ from basic goods because Israel is deliberately imposing a blockade."
Read moreFix Your Headline Global News: I Would Be More Than Anxious if I Was Forcibly Displaced
"I take issue with your headline. The term 'anxiety' downplays the gravity of their situation. Words like 'fled' or 'forcibly displaced' would more accurately convey their experience leading to their reunification."
Read moreAP article published on Toronto Star's website fails to meet basic journalism standards
"I’ve consistently provided The Associated Press with this type of feedback since January 2024. I’ve emailed a total of 75 letters to a range of journalists and editors at AP. In all of these letters, I’ve laid out well-researched and thorough arguments explaining how they’ve violated basic journalistic standards, as well as recommended edits. Despite this consistent feedback, The Associated Press has not replied to a single one of my letters. This lack of responsiveness and accountability demonstrates that AP has closed itself off to meaningful dialogue with its readers."
Read moreArticle presents uncorroborated Israeli claims as facts
"Journalistic accuracy depends on clearly differentiating between assertions and facts. If an assertion has not been independently verified, journalistic integrity demands it be reported as the spokesperson’s opinion or perspective, rather than as an established fact. Bearing this in mind, while Palestinian accounts are often questioned, Israel's apartheid regime is frequently regarded as credible and reliable."
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