Thanks for highlighting grief and suffering of Palestinian community following the military raid of Jenin refugee camp
"Thank you especially for highlighting Sadeel’s classmates’ grief at her funeral and your effort to humanize this child and her family by letting her father tell us about his daughter’s life in Jenin Refugee Camp. In doing so Sadeel becomes not just a statistic, as Palestinian deaths are so often reported."
Read moreInsufficient context in Hamas funding article in Toronto Star
"While the entire article was about the arrest of father and daughter duo for their suspected ties to Hamas and funding of bodies related to the organization, there is no description of Hamas"
Read moreProblematic and misleading language regarding the forced expulsion of a Palestinian family
"Eviction’ suggests to a Canadian audience that this is a disagreement between a landlord and tenant. In reality, the Gahith-Sub family’s experience is the ongoing effort of the Israeli government to forcibly displace Jerusalem’s Palestinian population."
Read moreIsraeli settler violence in Palestinian Town highlighted by Toronto Star
"It is particularly refreshing to read an article which includes several Palestinian voices reporting first-hand on the violence they have been experiencing at the hands of the illegal settlers, who continue to terrorize and disrupt their lives. Furthermore, we appreciate the up-to-date coverage of the events affecting Palestinians in the occupied West Bank. Your article provides readers with the necessary context to understand the recent events by succinctly recapping them. This is highly useful."
Read moreIsrael's treatment of Palestinians highlighted in the Toronto Star
Palestinians have been living under occupation for several decades and are subjected to restrictions on their movement, freedom of expression, rights abuses and violence at the hands of the Israeli forces as well as Israeli settlers.
Read moreChronic imbalance in descriptions of Palestinian and Israeli violence by Associated Press
The use of such strong language when describing Israeli settler attacks on innocent Palestinians, especially in a situation in which the violence is asymmetrical, is inflammatory and a violation of basic journalistic standards. I insist that you immediately remove the words “revenge” or “avenge” in both articles and their headlines.
Read moreThanks for including diverse sources and context about the murder of Omar Assad
"I also appreciate the inclusion of Shireen Abu-Akleh’s case as it points to a larger, systematic issue that Palestinians face. This provides key information to the readers that many reports often omit."
Read moreMisleading headline and failure to include Palestinian perspectives on Israeli military raid in Ramallah
"The article, which relies mostly on information sourced from the Israeli military, fails to mention that the Israeli military fired live bullets, stun grenades, and tear gas, at Palestinian residents protesting the raid and demolition, wounding at least 35, including 20 who suffered from gunshot wounds. According to the Palestinian news agency Wafa, Israeli forces also deliberately injured two Palestinian journalists, Rabee Munir and Momen Samreen, who suffered serious wounds to the head and abdomen. The article also fails to specify that the demolition of Islam Faroukh’s house displaced his parents and four sisters – exemplifying the real brutality and damage by Israeli forces that are absent from Israeli military sources."
Read moreLimited context about Jerusalem's legal and historical status in article about the Armenian community in occupied East Jerusalem
As I’m sure you know, Jerusalem is one of the five “final status” issues from the 1993 Oslo Accords. Israel and the Palestinians are not supposed to change the status quo until a negotiated agreement is reached. Jerusalem was also intended to be a shared international zone under the 1947 UN Partition Plan. Moreover, the UN repeatedly censures Israel for “altering or purporting to alter the legal status and physical and demographic character of the city.”
Read moreFailure to contextualize the Nakba and reasons that forced Palestinians to flee their homes
"For Palestinians, the creation of the state of Israel in 1948 constituted a Nakba or ‘catastrophe,’ where families were forcibly expelled from their homes to make way for Jewish immigrants coming from Europe and the Middle East and North Africa. The massacres of Palestinian villages by Zionist militias, the most well-known being the Deir Yassin, is what drove Palestinians to flee."
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