Saltwire improves description of West Bank casualty figures

On September 29, 2023, SaltWire news service showed continued improvement in describing the causes of violence in the occupied West Bank. Where this news service had previously listed the causes of violence in an order inverse to their significance, they have corrected this.

The previous description read as follows:

The West Bank has seen a wave of violence over the past 18 months, with a series of deadly attacks by Palestinians on Israelis, brazen attacks by Jewish settlers on Palestinian towns and villages and stepped up raids by the Israeli military.

The new description, after CJPME efforts, reads:

Violence in the West Bank has raged for more than a year, amid stepped-up Israeli military raids, increased settler assaults on Palestinian villages, and a spate of Palestinian attacks on Israelis.

That last phrase still requires serious improvement. Our work continues!