The Media Accountability Project  

"Ce langage nébuleux peut porter à confusion vos lecteurs alors qu’il insinue une symétrie de pouvoir entre le Hamas et Israël et que les victimes sont autant Israéliennes que Palestiniennes ce qui n’est pas le cas." Continue reading

"Your framing suggests that Hamas sometimes uses civilian clothing in combat settings, but Israel does not. This is simply not the case. I insist that you correct your article to make clear that there are examples of both Hamas and Israeli fighters engaging in combat in civilian clothing." Continue reading

"To state that their demands are complete divestment from companies “believed to be contributing to Israel’s war against Hamas” muddles their clearly stated aims. "Israel’s war against Hamas" or "Israel Hamas War" are loaded terms. They imply that Israel’s military and ground assault is only targeting Hamas, though most essential infrastructure has been grazed, and over 32,000 Palestinians have been killed, most of whom are healthcare/aid workers, women, children, and infants." Continue reading

"In that case, I would recommend alternating between the names listed above. Referring to Gaza and Palestine as an ambiguous “region” lacks precision and perpetuates Canadian media’s tendency to leave Palestine and its indigenous people unnamed." Continue reading

"It implies that Israel’s military and ground assault is only targeting Hamas, though most essential infrastructure has been grazed, and over 32,000 Palestinians have been killed, most of whom are healthcare/aid workers, women, children, and infants." Continue reading

"Consistently giving priority to statements provided by Israel’s military and deliberately excluding testimonies provided by witnesses or Palestinian officials is a blatant double standard and perpetuates Canadian media’s tendency to assign the burden of proof to anyone but Israel." Continue reading

"It is unfortunate that an article with some key points about standing up against antisemitism would be diminished by such blatant disregard for truth." Continue reading

"I understand that journalists choose the scope of their piece. What concerns me is that you do include Islamophobia in the scope of your article, but fail to give it near as much attention as antisemitism. I think it is important, at the very least, we hear from people who can speak about Islamophobia and anti-Palestinian racism." Continue reading

"I insist that you add, at the very least, elements of context about the situation in Gaza, such as the ICJ ruling, Canada’s obligations under international law, and pro-Palestinian voices, to make your article balanced and for your readers to properly understand why this motion comes at such a pressing time." Continue reading

"I particularly appreciated your efforts in presenting real-life experiences and amplifying the voices of Palestinians, including children who have been traumatized by Israel’s military campaign. Your portrayal of the exhaustion and strain felt by all, including medical personnel, was spot on." Continue reading