Article falls short on providing proper context and explaining the brutality of Israeli settlers in the West Bank
"While violence in the West Bank has escalated since October 7th, it is not a new, unprecedented, reality but rather a longstanding issue for Palestinians."
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False claims and double standards in article about Iran attack on Israel
"I recall complaining to numerous Canadian media outlets that Israel’s repeated 2023 attacks on the Jenin refugee camp were not described as “offensive.” But here, in a single article, Iran’s response to Israel’s assassinations in Syria is described as an “offensive” four different times. Again, there is hardly any debate around the world that Iran’s attack was retaliatory, and yet you describe it as an 'offensive'."
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Correction needed to specify that 16 people were killed in Israeli strike on Iranian embassy, not two
"On April 3, the Syrian Observatory for Human Rights reported that 16 people had been killed in the Israeli strike on the Iranian embassy in Syria. This death toll is composed of diplomats, military commanders, and others. To write and publish that only two Iranian generals were killed is inaccurate and grossly undermines the scale of Israel’s military strike and its damage."
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RE: "Who can stop Benjamin Netanyahu"
"When it comes to Israel, it's important to remember that far-right politics permeates the structure of Israeli society. Netanyahu represents Israeli society. Recent polls have shown that most rightists and religious Zionists prioritize "destroying Hamas" over the return of the hostages."
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Correction needed to specify that Israel's actions are 'military' invasions
"The use of the word 'operation' to describe Israel’s military siege on Al-Shifa hospital is particularly problematic. Please precede the word 'operation' with 'military,” or opt for the most specific description: 'military siege'."
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Change needed to clarify that Israel's military assault on Gaza isn't a "wave of violence"
"Considering this is the first instance of you vaguely alluding to 'violence' in the article, it should be precise and descriptive. Instead, I implore you to consider using 'Israel’s military assault and blockade on Gaza' as a substitute for the 'ongoing wave of violence in Gaza'."
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Thanks for providing a factual and humane account of the genocide in Gaza & Palestinians living in the occupied West Bank
"Personally, even in Kelowna, I have watched my Muslim friends struggling through both Ramadan and now Eid al-Fitr, given the horrifying reality of life for Palestinians living in the West Bank, East Jerusalem, and Gaza."
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Correction needed to offer a more complete picture about the consequences professionals face for voicing their pro-palestine stance
"You do not mention the broader context of the conflation between antisemitism and anti-Zionism that Dahab was subjected to and, thus, the crackdown on free speech, which she was a victim of. Please be more explicit on the issue of free speech by adding a section from this open letter to your article. Free speech is a core aspect of this controversy."
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Article fails to provide enough context to give a complete picture of Israel's acts of genocide in Gaza
"The human cost, as of April 8, is that at least 33207 Gazans have been killed by Israel, including 14500 children, 489 health workers and 243 aid workers, and 75933 have been wounded."
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Article fails to reference & add context about the genocide unfolding in Gaza
"Writing “the war between Israel and Hamas” and “since Hamas attacked Israel on Oct.7” is not only an insufficient piece of context, but it’s also not a fair and accurate way to describe the genocide in Gaza."
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