Biased article based on unfounded sources lacks context

"In the first part of your article you reproduce statements from almost exclusively Israeli sources without attempting to analyze or contextualize and make the connections with the second part, in which you list applicable excerpts from the Geneva Convention. You leave it to the reader to make these connections." Continue reading

 

Omission of Palestinian casualties in opinion article

"That is why I suggest adding the number of Palestinian casualties since October 7, as it would be a form of dehumanization not only to Palestinians but to Muslims to exclude them. It would also make the more sense to include this data as this is the point you are trying to make in your article: to fight hate in all its forms." Continue reading

 

Urgent clarification needed regarding UNRWA evidence

"Israel’s allegation – that 12 of UNRWA’s 30,000 employees may have participated in the October 7 Hamas attack in some way and that 190 UNRWA employees are double agents – has not been proven and must be approached with significant caution and qualification." Continue reading

 

Missing information concerning the ruling of Israel’s ICJ case

"This is an inaccurate and incomplete depiction of what the International Court of Justice has ordered Israel to do. Also, such words tend to downplay the severity and gravity of Israel’s actions in Gaza, which amount to genocide." Continue reading

 

No mention of Islamophobia, anti-Palestinian racism and Israel's case at the ICJ

"I insist that you include a reference to the fact that the ICJ has ruled that South Africa’s contention that Israel is committing genocide is plausible and that Israel has a duty to do more to prevent genocide in Gaza. Please add this important context when speaking about Israel’s attacks on Palestine." Continue reading

 

Missing context regarding the abduction of journalist Mansour Shouman

"Mansour Shouman’s case has been relatively well-documented, yet this article omits key details, like his role as a citizen journalist and eyewitness accounts of Shouman being arrested by the IDF, as reported by CTV News." Continue reading

 

Re: “We Can’t Take Our Allies for Granted”

"Despite Mr Augustein’s plea for more allies to join the Netanyahu, Zionist-led, right-wing government of the State of Israel in its continued occupation and obliteration of Palestine, our common plea must be for breaking these cycles of abuse. As the famous Jewish American Albert Einstein said ‘peace cannot be achieved by force only by understanding’." Continue reading

 

Sensational claims about anti-semitism need further explanation

"This is such a bold and extraordinary claim, which Marie Woolf has editorialized in an even more sensationalist fashion, that readers deserve more information. While such a thing may have been said, and ought to be condemned if it was, to make this particularly hateful phrase seem like part of some pro-Hamas movement is a spectacular claim for a serious journalist to make." Continue reading

 

Use of passive language in article dehumanizes Palestinians

"Why have Israelis been killed, yet Palestinians have died? This passive language muddles reality by absolving Israel of any responsibility as the perpetrator of these Palestinian deaths." Continue reading

 

Re: “Woman hidden from Nazis appeals for Palestinian children on Holocaust Remembrance Day”

"While history is important to learn so that we don’t repeat it, one cannot help but think that we haven’t learned from it, especially since the Genocide Convention, the basis for South Africa’s case at the ICJ, was conceived in response to the Holocaust." Continue reading