Re: “Moved in yet kept out” by Bryan Laprise”

That said, I’d like to raise a concern that echoes a point made by Palestinian writer Mohammed El-Kurd, from occupied Jerusalem, in Perfect Victims and the Politics of Appeal. He writes, “correspondents kill us with passive voice… they never mention the culprit, let alone condemn the culprit.” Continue reading

 

Thank you for an excellent article with one suggestion for revision

"As early as 2024, Israeli intelligence agencies have said they consider the numbers reported by the Gaza Health Ministry "generally accurate" and use them internally. Why is that fact left out of your otherwise excellent article?" Continue reading

 

Broadcast amplifies unverified Israeli claims

"Over the past 20 months of genocide Israel has been caught out in countless lies. This is so well documented that all Israeli claims should be delivered with skepticism and be challenged. Anything less is sloppy journalism. There should also be a Palestinian voice in all such stories. This is a “conflict” so there are at least two sides, but we so often hear only one." Continue reading

 

One-sided segment of Gaza Humanitarian Foundation needs on-air correction

"Although the segment briefly acknowledged the Palestinian death toll and included a short quote from a Palestinian woman, it overwhelmingly amplified Israeli military denials through a video statement by an IDF general. The purpose of this video is clearly to cast doubt on Palestinian and independent sources and reinforcing the narrative of the occupying power without scrutiny." Continue reading

 

Concern over uncritical repetition of unverified and false Israeli claims

"I request that you revise this section, rejecting racist language that rationalizes violence against civilians." Continue reading

 

Thank you for shedding light on the story of Palestinian Ward Al-Sheikh Khalil

"The lives of children like Ward and Hind — and of Palestinian women and men — are rarely granted front-page coverage. Their stories are buried, while Israeli narratives dominate the news cycle with urgency and emotion." Continue reading

 

“Real estate” events are promoting buying illegally occupied Palestinian land in the West Bank

"This event promoted illegal acts that only rub salt in the wounds of Palestinians suffering here in Toronto and across the country. These “events” had nothing to do with religious worship; the protests were a legitimate response to a meeting supporting an illegal practice. Without this context your article insinuates that the protests were against Jewish people and the Jewish state; in short, antisemitic, which they absolutely were not." Continue reading

 

Failure to provide critical context on Israel’s violations of intern’ law

"Your coverage also neglects to contextualize Israel’s ongoing bombardment of Gaza, which has killed over 54,000 Palestinians, as part of a broader pattern of systematic violence and collective punishment. The CAJ’s guidelines emphasize the importance of avoiding passive language that obscures responsibility, yet the article repeatedly does so." Continue reading

 

Sincere thanks + constructive feedback on CBC article

"Once again, I thank you for publishing this article, and I encourage the CBC to continue to highlight the horrific impacts of Israel’s ongoing military operations in Gaza on Palestinians, as we work to collectively draw attention to voices, perspectives and movements that are often sidelined in Canadian mainstream media." Continue reading

 

Winnipeg Free Press must clarify the line between antisemitism and anti-Zionism

"In fact, conflating legitimate criticism of Israel—an apartheid state and occupying power currently waging an ongoing genocide against Palestinians in the occupied Gaza Strip—with antisemitism is itself a form of antisemitism, as it erases the distinction between a political ideology and Jewish identity." Continue reading