Thanks for showing the depth of the suffering & losses that Palestinians are experiencing

"Thank you again for a well-researched and informative article. It demonstrated the depth of the suffering and losses that Palestinians are experiencing - losses that extend beyond the physical loss of life and property." Continue reading

 

Uncorroborated claim that Gaza limits access to journalists

"Journalism permits for Gaza are granted by Israel, and Hamas secondarily can grant its own permit to journalists. Israel has blocked journalists from entering Gaza, not Hamas. The article you link to does not substantiate the claim you are making." Continue reading

 

Factual errors in recent article about Oct.7 attack by Hamas need to be corrected

"You report that 300 Israeli citizens were taken hostage. According to the Israeli army, “the number of captives is 240,” so writing “300” is not supported by any other available sources. Like my point above, not all of those who were taken captive by Hamas were Israeli civilians. The captives include Israeli soldiers, civilians, and foreigners. Please correct this factual error and clarify your language to avoid implying that all those taken captive were civilians." Continue reading

 

Thanks for exposing the double standard that applies to those advocating for Palestinian human rights

"Thank you for also pointing out that not only Dr. Thomson's but many other voices for Palestine are being stifled by institutions. I was especially pleased to see the link to your November 24, 2023 article, " A chill has crept into Ontario's health sector..." We can still ask the same question you asked then: "" In what world are doctors saying "stop killing" or "don't bomb hospitals" contradicting their professional, moral, or ethical obligations?" " Continue reading

 

Correction nécessaire pour préciser qu'Israël occupe la bande de Gaza

"De ce fait, dire que Gaza n’est pas occupée n’est pas seulement faux, mais fait fi complètement des responsabilités qu'Israël a en tant que puissance occupante en droit international et dans le génocide qu’il inflige aux Palestiniens." Continue reading

 

USCPR Toolkit wasn't "leaked," it's readily available on their website

"Kinsella repeatedly refers to a “secret plan” that was “leaked” to him: a document that comes from the U.S. Campaign for Palestinian Rights’ (USCPR). However, the document is not secret at all." Continue reading

 

Description on "Israel-Hamas War" landing page dehumanizes Palestinians

"Beyond the obfuscation of the Palestinian death toll, this description undermines the scale of Palestinian suffering in Gaza. Israel’s military assault and siege on Gaza has killed, but it has also wounded, starved, and displaced most Palestinians in the strip. Death, albeit salient, is only one component of Israel’s menacing military campaign in Gaza." Continue reading

 

L'article utilise un langage qui minimise la brutalité de la situation à Gaza et la responsabilité d'Israël

"Ce langage nébuleux peut porter à confusion vos lecteurs alors qu’il insinue une symétrie de pouvoir entre le Hamas et Israël et que les victimes sont autant Israéliennes que Palestiniennes ce qui n’est pas le cas." Continue reading

 

Correction needed to clarify that there are examples of both Hamas and Israeli fighters engaging in combat in civilian clothing

"Your framing suggests that Hamas sometimes uses civilian clothing in combat settings, but Israel does not. This is simply not the case. I insist that you correct your article to make clear that there are examples of both Hamas and Israeli fighters engaging in combat in civilian clothing." Continue reading

 

Both the title and language throughout article misrepresents the demands of McGill Hunger Strikers

"To state that their demands are complete divestment from companies “believed to be contributing to Israel’s war against Hamas” muddles their clearly stated aims. "Israel’s war against Hamas" or "Israel Hamas War" are loaded terms. They imply that Israel’s military and ground assault is only targeting Hamas, though most essential infrastructure has been grazed, and over 32,000 Palestinians have been killed, most of whom are healthcare/aid workers, women, children, and infants." Continue reading